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Barney & Friends episodes and their effect on children watching - I just need to check my grammar


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Oct 29, 2015   #1
Diversity means valuing and celebrating the differences between people. There are many forms of being diverse like such as age, culture, education, ethnicity, experience, gender, race, religion and that make people unique. Diversity is considered as one of the best ways to share relationship between different cultures or languages. Inclusive education is concerning equality being welcome and embraced as member who belong. To make other feel included. Inclusive is supporting and educating children with learning difficulties about valuing all individuals by giving them a fair chance to include without discrimination.

The first episodes is called "My Family's Just Right for Me" the number of incidents of nine diversity inclusion. Barney and his friends are going to celebrate family night with all the students at school. There are different activities that they are going to do with Barney to motivated Kathy. Kathy is not sure about her family because is just her mom, her grandmother and herself. Barney gets through with his ideas by different games so Kathy can be happy about her family size. A the end the children realize that there are different family size and that the most important is to love you family no matter how big or small there are.

The second episode is "Caring Means Sharing" Min come from a big family and she tired of sharing with her sibling. She don't want to share with her friends because she share everything at her house with her sibling. Barney is try to change Min idea about sharing to help learn the value of sharing with other peers and her sibling.Third episode is called "Be a Friend" Tasha is the new girl at school without friends and she feels lonely. Barney introduces Tasha to her new classmate. They learn why doing new activities and having new friends can be good. Barney teach them the true meaning of friendship.

The last episode is "A New Friend " it have six diversity inclusion. This episode is about make new friends, when you new in a new place. Barney influence the kids through different of activities to help Colleen go from being a new kid and new friends. Barney teach them that whether friends are near or far they can always be friends.

Piaget's theory of cognitive development concerning how children learn. Pre operation stage the child begin to develop ability described by image and speak with words. Children learn through pretend play during this stage. Children at this stage have the ability to develop language to describe people, events and feelings. The episode that most describe Piaget stages of development is "Be a Friend" because they cannot accept other people's perception other than their own. They believe that everyone thinks as they do.

The episode "My Family's Just Right for Me" explain Erikson's theory the first stage being trust vs. mistrust. This is the time a child develops a sense of trust when their parents are showing them affection. If the child successfully develops trust then the child will feel safe.This stage is marked by initiative vs guilt children become curious about everything that they see. Children feel secure in their skills to guide others and make their own decision.

Freud was a theorist who wanted to look at humans and how they developed.The episode is "A New Friend " the third stage is the phallic stage age 3 to 6, during this stage the main challenge is the ego is called the Oedipal conflict. He believed that many emotions were caused by unconscious sexual desires, some of which originated in infancy. Latency period which children become less concerned with their bodies and turn their attention to the skills needed for coping with the environment.

Lawrence Kholberg spent many years researching how individuals develop their own moral codes. The episode "Caring Means Sharing" cognitive developmental theory of moralization which has now become prominent in the field of interpersonal conformity and its application to moral education. Pre conventional level moral reasoning is especially common in children. Kohlberg develop his theory through analyzing people's solutions to a number of moral dilemmas. Kohlberg develop his theory through analyzing people's solutions to a number of moral dilemmas.

I think by the age of eight to ten it better for a child to watch TV. If the child sit in front of TV all day, their time is getting wasted instead of playing outdoor with friend it can create social isolation. Children should spend most of their time playing and studying, which would give them better result later and keep them healthy.Watching television often has give bad effect for children. They watch television while they eat, to entertain guest or before they go to bed.Television also has positive effects. Children sometimes learn how to count or read from watching educational programs on television.I think that television has bad and good influence for children's health but is better if children spend less time watching TV.
FARZ1 2 / 9 2  
Oct 31, 2015   #2
Hi i rephrased a few lines to just improve grammar and polish your well- thought out essay. If you think this is helpful I'll contribute further .. Good luck!!

like such as age, culture, education, ethnicity, experience, gender, race, religion and that makes people unique.

Diversity is considered as one of the best ways to share relationship between different cultures or language. Inclusive education isconcerning ensures equality within student or learning groups by accepting and embracing each one's unique identity. being welcome and embraced as member who belong . To make other feel included. Inclusivity in children's education is supporting and educating children with learning difficulties about valuing all individuals by giving them a fair chance to include without discrimination. the concept of providing children with an ecosystem wherein, they thrive on freedom and confidence preparing them for the world ahead of them.


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