Let me point out some corrections for you. The strikeouts mean to delete, red means to replace, blue means to add :-)
The basic part a skeleton of every relationship is trust
- The
basis of...
I would like to choose people as friends who are intelligent
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The people I choose to become my friends are intelligent...
and have senses of humor,
- have
asense of...
but the most important characteristics of friends should be reliable
- the most important
characteristic of a friend is
reliability .
In fact, we need those people who
...
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Weneed people who ...
help us where we get involved in troubles.
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when we get involved...
we need friends who can understand us, when wecould not response their demands
- when we
cannot be a friend to them during their own time of need.because they decide to deceive us to obtain our properties or private information etc .
- they
betray our confidence, our trust, and their reliability as friends in the future...Thereby if we do not know exactly the personality of a person who wants to have a close relationship with us, w
- So, if we do not...
Thereby, we need those people who we can rely on.
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We need...
To sum up, based on before mentioned ideas, to choose everybody as a friend, however, being smart or having a sense of humor seems to be attractive, but the most important trait of a person as a close friend is reliability.
- Therefore, keeping in mind the previously mentioned ideas about the importance of reliability in a friendship, it becomes easier for all of us to understand why reliability should be the foundation of every strong friendship we make.
I hope you won't mind that I reworded some sentences for you. I just felt the thoughts would flow better that way. I hope you like it. Use this as a reference for your next essay if you wish :-)