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Some believe children should be taught to give speeches and presentations in school. Why is this?


Gia Lac 1 / 1  
Aug 26, 2021   #1

children learn to give speeches and presentations



These days, when our scientific knowledge and life qualities have been developed, then if we want our children to take over this enormous achievement, we have to improve our education system. That is the reason why we have to let them learn how to give speeches and presentations in school.

At first, we knew that when somebody wants to give speeches they have to have enough confidence, knowledge and education background to give that, because when you have a speech or a presentation, you have to do that for at least 5 to uncountable of people to hear or watch it. So when we teach children how to give speeches and presentations in school, that means we have given them the foundation to be a leader, a successful man, a confident man who wants to be a confident, erudite, and have their own positions in society or just an enthusiastic man who wants to follow their own dream. There is no disadvantage to this problem, just benefit and beyond.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 14,835 4783  
Aug 28, 2021   #2
The writer shall fail the test with this type of presentation. The main scoring consideration is always the word count. That is checked first by the examiner. He expects to find no less than 250 words in the presentation. Less than 250 words means that he will be forced to apply deductions in the TA section due to the insufficient word count. Since this essay is only over 100 words, I am afraid there will not be enough of a base score consideration left to allow it to meet the the passing score requirements.

The writer Has not provided ample responses for the 2 discussion questions. In fact, there is only a partially developed response for the first question as indicated in the original prompt. It is the lack of discussion development for 2 questions that led to the failure of this essay. The writer neglected to respond to both questions, hence the lower than required word count. In this case, nothing can be done to increase the score. Meet the word count next time and respond fully to all provided discussion questions. That is the best way to achieve a passing possibility in this test.
OP Gia Lac 1 / 1  
Aug 28, 2021   #3
Oh thanks, but i really don't know how to answer exactly the second question to meet the requirements of the judge, can help me with it ? @Holt


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