Although, it is far away from my country, it took a few minutes
(eliminate the first comma)Comparing to the past, it would have to spendtaken at least one day to convey news to people through newspaper.
which make them fidget
--> what do you mean?
spend too much time waiting for the next one
Owing to the spread and development of Internet,
--> You just used "owing to" in the second paragraph. Try not to repeat yourself. Replace it with other phrases like "thanks to" or "by dint of".
In a nutshell
--> you'd better use "In conclusion" or "In summary",... instead.
Internet has been the most beneficial for people all around the world.
Always use "the" before "Internet".