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Benefits of studying abroad introduction


tinyyy 2 / -  
Sep 2, 2020   #1

study at school overseas



There's an undeniable fact that something strange is always drawing people's interest and stimulating human curiosity, especially things in a foreign country. Therefore, a vast number of students choose to acquire school overseas. From my point of view, be educated aboard provide a lot of advantages for learners who always want to and attend to high-quality education and get cultural experiences. I will give some simple examples to support my outlook.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 14,835 4783  
Sep 2, 2020   #2
The first sentence in your presentation does not relate to education. Your statements, from the very start, should align itself with the given topic. In this case, that is education. Education overseas in particular. Your educational interest should be supported by a desire to learn about other cultures and communities. Your reference to students should direct the reader towards what reasons might interest a student to study overseas. Studying overseas is different from acquiring school overseas. Nobody acquires a school overseas unless they buy one. A student, goes overseas to acquire an education, not a school. Since you are writing your introductory statement, you should practice outlining your discussion points in the last 2 sentences. By outlining your discussion points, you will be able to add clarity to your explanation, since you will be giving the reader an example of reasons related to the topic provided.


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