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The benefits of travelling for the traveller


behrooz_00133 3 / 3  
Oct 19, 2013   #1
Today more people are traveling then ever before, why is this case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?

As a matter of fact people in late decade people are more inclined to travel than before. In comparison with the past that people had to spend months or even a year on roads and seas to reach destination, in this century development of technology lay the foundation for us to travel more, faster and in easier way.

soheylvahabzade 2 / 4  
Oct 19, 2013   #2
hi sir
in this case i agree with you and in my opinion one of the most important decisions which a man can make is immigration that is related to traveling

you can obtain lots of expriences during your trips
i wanna emphasis on voyage trips of PERSIAN GOLF
thanks
something 23 / 52 5  
Oct 19, 2013   #3
I personally disagree with you. I think that economic recession in many country make people do not spend much money to travel. However, I always want to travel. :)
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Oct 19, 2013   #4
As a matter of fact people in late decade people are more inclined to travel than before.

... This is not a very clear sentence. The word "people" getting repeated too often and that confuses the reader. Which people, I mean people in the past or now, are more inclined towards travelling? I guess you want to say that people of the modern era are more towards travelling due to the development of transportation. But that sentence gives the impression that people in the past were more inclined towards travelling :(


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