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The best gift for a child? Books help to learn more skills such as pronouncing and reading


sara waled 2 / 2 1  
Sep 17, 2014   #1
There are many variety of great gift that we can give it to the child , from my personal opinion the best gift child can have is a book . I feel this way for three different reasons. First, child can learn more from the book . Second, child will have an enjoyable time . Third, child can participate this gift with others. For these reasons . I will explain in following essay. I feel there is no better gift for child than book.

To begin with , learn more from the book . Books help child to learn more skills such as pronouncing and reading different words also , child write will improve after answering questions that related to different chapters for example child usually will finish reading chapter and then after each end of chapter there is a lots of questions with different type full the filed, multiple choose that examine child understood. Moreover , child will learn various knowledge and it may help him to get higher grade in school .

Secondly , child will have an enjoyable time . Children loves integrate learning with fun and that is indicate why the books have an interesting cover and colorful text with comic art .

Thirdly, child can participate this gift with others. Child can shared book with his friends and learned as group or he might lends his book to a friend and visa-versa and that will improve lack of ownership .I remember when i was i child my mother give me story of pet and after i went to school i give to my teacher and she read the story for whole class .

In conclusion , I feel that a book is the very best gift to give to a child since he is young and can learn more skills.

Adamtong 9 / 32 2  
Sep 17, 2014   #2
There are many variety of great gift that we can give it to the child , from my personal opinion the best gift child can have is a book .

There are many variety of great gift that we can give to the child. In my opinion,the best gift is book.

Third, child can participate this gift with others.
Third, child can share the gift with others.

To begin with , learn more from the book .
To begin with , we can acquire a lot of information from the book .
fikri 5 / 317 71  
Sep 17, 2014   #3
There are many variety of great gift that we can give it to the child , from my personal opinion the best gift child can have is a book

There are various great gifts that we can give to the children. It seems to me that the best one is a book.

First, child can learn more from the book . Second, child will have an enjoyable time . Third, child can participate this gift with others.

First, children can learn more from their book . Second, they will have more enjoyable time . Also, they can participate this gift with their friends.

To begin with , learn more from the book

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to begin with, they will learn more from the given book.

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