I strongly support the importance of passionate interest topassion for achievinganya remarkable goal,
engineering and architectural breakthroughs,
What do you mean?
could lead to the achievement of such a goal.
Nevertheless, we must take into account other factors, which I think isareimportant toocrucial in order to produceingsuch a brilliant idea, like determination, accessiblity of equipments, and self- esteem.
passionate interest
repetition
the most importantsignificant (synonym)factorelement (synonym) which is requiredin order to achieve any goals
foundingestablishment of the biggest software organization in the world , Microsoft.
this successful idea wasthea result of passionatehis strong interest in software designing which he had , in a way that, after he was expelled from Harvard university,
achieve a
repetition. Use synonym.
big personsgreat people/celebrities
It is not common to use the word "person" as a plural word.
The success of many prosperous peoplemost of big persons during past decades is ascribed totheir success toperseverancehard work and determination
For example an Iranian commander, known as Teymour Lang,escapedtook refuge in a lonely, oldto a ruin house after becoming injured during a battle.
watched
the word "gazed" or "stared" is better.
the top of a stone
He narrated the ant had tried 40 times untilto become successfullyin the endcarried wheat to top of the stone
those difficultiesobstacles one