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The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things


hsn 2 / 2  
Aug 20, 2012   #1
In the assertion that the best ideas arise from passionate interest in commonplace things, I strongly support the importance of passionate interest to achieve any remarkable goal, such as artistic feats, engineering and architectural breakthroughs, and any idea that could lead to achieve such a goal. Nevertheless we must take into account other factors which I think is important too in order to producing such a brilliant idea, like determination, accessible equipment s, and self- esteem.

Admittedly, passionate interest is most important factor in order to achieve any goal. For example, the most famous businessman in the world, Bill Gates, had a remarkable idea of founding the biggest software organization, Microsoft. Certainly, this successful idea was the result of passionate interest in software designing which he had, in a way that, after he was expelled from university, he did not give up producing computer software until he founded the Microsoft.

Nobody can underestimate the importance of determination to successfully achieve any particular goal. As we know, most of big persons during past decades ascribed their success to hard work and determination. For example an Iranian commander escaped to a ruin house after got injured during a battle. In that house, he watched an ant was trying to carry a wheat seed to top of a stone. He narrated the ant had tried 40 times until successfully carried wheat to top of the stone. This story taught him a big lesson: road to any goal passes through a lot of difficulties, and to conquer those difficulties one needs a lot of determination. That commander had a lot of successful conquests after learning that lesson, though he lamed after that injury.

Another important and effective factor that is necessary in order to producing good ideas is accessible equipments, such as labs, good teachers, and even enough time of free mind to think deeply. Consider a poor student who is studying in a university which has least possible equipments, for example. You can not expect him to produce ideas that are as good as a student studying in MIT for example.

Self- esteem is another significant factor in order to have good ideas. If you do not believe in your ideas, you would not follow them because you think they are worthless. Self-esteem give believe and courage to follow the ideas until converting them to practical ones. In other word, I think self-esteem causes determination and believe to be more successful.

To sup up, admittedly the assertion that passionate interest in commonplace things in most important factor to produce any good idea, I believe some other factors are important too such as determination, accessible equipments, and self-esteem.
ah_zafari [Contributor] 40 / 672 148  
Aug 20, 2012   #2
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OP hsn 2 / 2  
Aug 20, 2012   #3
Thank you for your help, it is accurate and complete and really helpful for me.

Regards
Hasan


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