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The best way for children to learn a new language is when they start in an earliest grade


thutyedaniel 32 / 38 17  
Apr 19, 2015   #1
All children should study a foreign language in school, starting in the earliest grades.

Language is one of the communication tools in all country in the world. Several people believe that student must study different languages in primary school because this the best time for put knowledge for them. However, others think that children in primary school need to explore their wish like because this age golden for them. Therefore, I personally argue that the best way to children for learning second language when they in earliest grades.

The best way for children to learn a new language when they in earliest grade. First, children have the most gain from this adventure because children at primary school able to a more understand what subject that enters in their brain. Also, in this age, children easy to imitate what they heard and what they see without understand more about the structure. Not only this, this action can make easy for them to learn about speaking especially in the case of spoken other language.

However, learning foreign language able to disturb students activities who are studying in primary school. For instance, students have a target to learn many lessons in their schools as main subject and students automatically must focus to their subjects, and this can cause students are very hard to learn other languages because leaning language needs a long process and time to understand. As a result, children should only study primary subjects in their schools.

To sum up, it seems to me that the government and multiple stakeholders should use curriculums including new language to primary schools, and students will be easier to learn second language. It is evident that parents also should give to support for their children to improve new knowledge.

Liliy 12 / 13 6  
Apr 19, 2015   #2
Hi thuty .. i have several suggestion here.. i hope this can help you to improve your writing.

All children should study a foreign language in school, starting in the earliest grades.Could you give a clear task here, agree or disagree / discuss/ others

Language is one of the communication tools in all country in the world. Several people believe that student must study different languages in primary school because this the best time for put knowledge for them. However, others think that children in primary school need to explore their wish like because this age golden for them. Therefore, I personally argue that the best way to children for learning second language when they in earliest grades.Language is a widely value of communication. For this reason, some people assume that students must study numerous languages in primary school due to golden age of children. While, others believe that youngster should obtain the best treatment as their ways to get better life, I personally argue that the best way to children getting enormous language education is in the earliest grades.

I suggest you to make simple and clear your introduction, and then your body paragraph will be better.

Cheers!
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,208 476  
Apr 28, 2015   #3
Make sure you go with some basic proofread prior to submitting your essay;

all country

all countries

for put

for putting/ in putting

their wish

their wishes

this age golden

this is golden age

the best way to children for learning second language when they in earliest grades.

the best way to learn second language is when children enter the early grades

children at primary school able to a more understand what subject that enters in their brain

Primary school students are more likely to understand the subject easily if they are taught with fun.
thanks,
eddy suaib


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