I have learned a lot of things in my life, but perhaps the most important thing of them all is how to be a good parent
Many people believe that successful parents who is feed theirparents are those who
Due my experience with four children, I prefer that children should be taught the discipline to be successful for the following reasons.
this sentence seems awkward!
children are not mature enough to practice the bad or good activities.
it should be differentiate/distinguish between
Scientist refer that the children could be taught before their birth
They have noticed that newborn babies can figure out their mothers' voice.
My sons were taught a lot of the
rightgood habits from their mother and me.
So they are all intelligent
For example, my sons were scheduled their day time for
teachinglearning many things such as a new language , art, computer.
A lot of time and money was spent to provide them with new technology to learn different sciences.this sentence is awkward too!
We are passing on a very materialistic era
There are many social, financial and moral problems which we face
d through our life.
If we leave our children to discover it by their own, they may encounter the danger cases.Again awkward in the ending of the sentence.
For instance, if they drive a car without any assistance, they may have an accident
I guess that's how it is written!
ed to learn, before the practice of it without assistance.
Thereby doing this they can
to be a successful adult in the society.
At this way, child will be creative person where she/he will live.Awkward!
Nonetheless, I prefer that children should be taught discipline in order to be successful because they are not mature and do not have enough experience Despite the corrections I have made, I think there's a lot to change in this essay. A lot in the writing style. You might want to write the whole piece again!
enough inof life.