Wedding is an important step of a person's life. Choosing a partner for the rest of your life is not so easy. It will be great if we can do like lobsters in nature: they choose each other once in their life and forever. Unfortunetely in our society things aren't so easy and expected. People meet, fall in love, marry, have children and sometimes get divorced. I think everyone of us, at least once in life, had asked himself if his partner should have been more similar to him rather than different. I really don't know which one is the best choice because sometimes people who are to similar to us become expected, predictable, boring just because we know them so well, we can know their way of thinking, acting, speaking and so on. Not all the time this it's a bad thing, it depends on people featuring and way of seeing love and being in love. Personally, now I have a partner who is very similar to me, we have a lot of things in commons, like diving, photography, computer passion, trekking. We are in love for each other but sometimes we strongly argue like children over ice creams. Despite of this, I think even arguing is a good moment for growing up with a partner, because is in this moment that we can find out our qualities and bad points. On the opposite if I chose a partner who is different from me, maybe I would have other types of issues, in fact I knew a couple, very different from each other, who often argue more than that I can do with my boyfriend. I see that they discuss for everything, even the most stupid thing in the world is a topic for being in contrast. On the other way they're very in love for 5 years and they will marry soon. So I think there's no just one point of view. It depends from person to person.
Hi, Idrofrance,
I have some suggestions want to tell you:
1. If you want to wirte a toelf essay, I think the first thing you need to do is to familar with the requirements of ETS. Like the essay struture, you may give you opinion in the first sentence, then give your two or three reasons to support it in the following paragraphs, finally, make a conclusion in the last sentence. I think in that way readers can understand your essay easier.
2. About the examples, you should give some more persuasive examples to support your opinion.
Anyway, you began with a good start, and that's just my some suggestions.
Sabrina
:)
Put the word "A" ion front:
A wedding is an ...
Unfortunetely in our society things aren't so easy and do not happen as we expec t.
People meet, fall in love, marry, have children and sometimes get divorced.---This is a very good sentence.
I think you should google this: How to write paragraphs correctly
Use paragraphs, and when you end a paragraph it will give you a chance to write a sentence that will be very meaningful. Write a meaningful sentence at the end of a paragraph, and the reader will think about that sentence more than the other sentences.
So, use paragraphs to emphasize your most important sentences.
:-)
