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Bird Migration to Another place - they manage to accurately travel connecting distant locations


naelendra 6 / 10 3  
Oct 10, 2016   #1
relocation is the accustomed weight bunch of animals involving their propagation land and the areas that they inhabit through the break of the year. journey is an admirable example of how nature has responded To the biological essential for variety to progress and sprawling into all potential ecological niches that can afford the situation compulsory for species to strain and elevate juvenile.

The the majority ordinary appearance of bird voyage involves traveling to advanced latitudes to bread for the period of the temperate season and them recurring to minor latitudes to bread during the warm season and then returning to lower latitudes during the non breeding episode

throughout resettlement the majority bird fly for a partial stage each day. probably concerning six to eight hours.
How bird manage to accurately travel connecting distant locations is one portion that has enthralled observers for centuries. current day researchers have attempted to realize this feat. most studies have establish that traveling birds all have some skill to find the technique and an inborn coerce to travel in a exacting route.

Ilmi_03 47 / 69 11  
Oct 10, 2016   #2
Hi, Naelendra :)

Relocation is the accustomed weight bunch of ...
It is better to pay more attention on capitalization. Honestly, I am confused with this statement since it contains a bunch of words. You should simplify them so that people can understand it straightforward.

Journey is an admirable example of how nature has responded to the biological essential (...) to strain and elevatejuvenile.
inappropriate word, juvenile means a young person

The the majority of ordinary (...) involves traveling to advancedhigher latitudes to bread for the period (...) to minor latitudes to breadfor breeding during the warm season,need comma

and then they returnreturning to lower latitudes during ... throughout resettlement the majority bird fly for a partial stage each day. probably concerning six to eight hours.


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