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Birds fly hundreds and thousands of kilometers to find the best conditions and habitats


Asma Raj 6 / 10  
Oct 10, 2016   #1
Migration is usual mobility of animals especially birds, and they will fly hundreds and thousands of kilometers to find the best conditions and habitats for feeding, breeding and raising their young. They will fly to other regions where conditions are better, and when the conditions at breeding sites become unfavorable. Furthermore, there are many different migration patterns of birds in the world. The majority of birds migrate from Northern Hemisphere which is the breeding areas existing, to Southern Hemisphere that wintering grounds being. However, some birds breed in southern parts of Africa continent and migrate to Northern wintering grounds, or horizontally, to enjoy the milder coastal climates in winter. Other birds reside on low-level lands during the winter months and move up a mountain for the summer. Also, there are nocturnal and diurnal migrants of birds. In nocturnal migrants, those birds rely on the illumination of stars for navigation in the night. Contrarily, in diurnal migrants, they migrate during the day and rely on the sun to find the place that their migration aim is located.
dinartika19 37 / 67 6  
Oct 10, 2016   #2
Hi Asma!

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Ilmi_03 47 / 69 11  
Oct 10, 2016   #3
Hello, Asma :)

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