The way you said it lets us believe that children are uncurious?!! I couldn't say that...
I want to mention children become uni-interest to try something new as caused of the traumatic event. But
o be uncurious , to try something new, person cautious because
this advice is quite coherence, thank you :)
Thanks God. Dumi can you read my mind ? I just confusing about making appropriate paraphrasing in introduction and your comment answer my confusing. Thank you :)
The personality and development of people are influenced by both their born characteristics and experiences. (hook) According to certain research studies, the characteristics we are born with play a dominant role in determining our personality and development. (background of the hook). However, in my personal belief, I think the experiences have more influence on our personality and development than born characteristics. (thesis statement)
Not "might", but they do influence :)
would you kindly tell me, in which time we should use modals as the way to write politely and the time we used strong words ?
*I hope my answer is quite understandable :D
heloooo, eddies....
This is a fragment sentence
I have to learn more about fragment and main sentence. But overall, may you give an appraisal about my writing.Is it answer the task responses, in any band thank you ?