E-commerce website
What is the name of the online store you bought the TV from?
it includes
If you did not purchase other items together with the TV, then you should not say "it includes" since it is a single item purchase.
using my Visa credit card under code #301095134 and delivered to me three days after by TED Express Service.
This is unnecessary data with regards to your purchase. Simply indicate your receipt number and that you are attaching a copy of it.
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