IELTS: Boys and Girls leisure activities; computer games, netball, basketball

The two pie charts compare children in different sex in terms of their cultural and leisure activities

Overall, there are many differences in terms of leisure and cultural activities between both sexes. However, boys and girls prefer to do three similar activities: reading, playing computer games, and listening music.

Turning to the girl's chart, it depicts that dancing is the most favourite activities in which 27 percent girls participate in. Next, reading coming second as 21 percent then it is followed respectively by playing games and Netball working by 15 and 16 percent girls. As a comparison with the former, girls take smallest interest for gymnastics and listening music in which 11 and 10 percent girls participate in.

A closer look at the counterpart, while coming second 17 percent of boys enjoy Basketball, the highest percentage by 34 shows that playing computer as the top choice. Therefore the neighboring percentage by 11 and 10 percent takes listening music and skateboarding as the immediate rate while reading coming as the least by 2 percent boys enjoying in their leisure.

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The two pie charts present the survey results of cultural and leisure activities of children as per their gender.
Overall, there are three activities both sexes tend to do. While, the boys are more likely to play computer games in the computer,and the girls prefer dancing to spend their leisure.

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