The inquiry of determining whether there was crime acted by Brad Pitt towards his own son remained clear without any charges. The Los Angeles County Department of Children and Family Services tried to seek the truth regarding this case, which occurred to his child during the flight in mid-September and found non-guilty evidences. However, this momentum used by his wife, Angelina Jolie, to condemn this issue to seek sole custody of her children. In responses towards her action, the court agreed with Pitt to make it joint custody rather than single childcare right. Even though the regulation to conduct joint custody has not published yet by the court, the process will remain unpredictable
AlohaFadil, here is my thought;
(1) your summary is too short, just four sentences. Therefore, you'd better make it longer between 150 and 250 words
(2) you have two subjects in a sentence e.g.
The inquiry of determining whetherand there was crime [...] just choose onethe inquiry or there
(3) However, this momentum was used by his wife, [...]
Hello Fadhil, let me give you my correction
... and found non-guilty
this momentum was used by his wife (because past tense form)
... there was crime WAS (PASSIVE VOICE S+BE+V3 ) acted by Brad Pitt ... ( CONFUSING SENTENCE AND THERE IS NO VERB, I THINK THAT WILL BETTER IF YOUR SENTENCE IS SIMPLE)
The Los Angeles CountR y Department of (...) Service
s tried to seek (...) which (S+V) occurred to his child ...
However, this moment
umIS used by his (...), to condemn this issueto seek sole custody of her children ( S+ V AGREEMENT).