Unanswered [18] | Urgent [0]
  

Home / Writing Feedback   % width Posts: 3

Brain has carrot and stick to teach us how to behave


Jawa 11 / 17 1  
Sep 22, 2016   #1
Brain has carrot and stick to teach us how to behave

In our daily activity, a brain plays an important role which ensures us do better in the future. there is a hub in the brain that doles out rewards and punishments to reinforce survival skills. We can imagine, for instance, when we want to go to have a dinner at a restaurant then our brain responses an untidy on so that this can decline our mood booster to eat because the brain commands other parts of bodies.

On the same case, a research reveals that all parts of our bodies rely on the brain as neurons cell affects to have the same feeling. As such, for some people, they need to listen to a spirit song in order to enhance their spirit. Likewise, some others argue that a positive thinking leads to a positive activity because this stimulates bodies to do so. in the light of these facts, there is no doubt that a brain plays an essential role to command all parts of bodies.

David54 15 / 22 1  
Sep 22, 2016   #2
Hallo,

There are several correction for you,

...there is a hub in the brain that doles outdistribute rewards and punishments ...
We can imagine, for instance, when we (...) then our brain givesuntidy responses an untidy ...
FirmanRomadhon20 9 / 15  
Sep 22, 2016   #3
Hello Jawa, This is some suggestions for you :

... which ensures us do something (it needs adding what activities to do) better in the future.

there is a hubrelation in the brain that doleswhat mean this is out rewards and punishments ...

... as neurons cell aeffects to have the same feeling.

I hope it helps


Home / Writing Feedback / Brain has carrot and stick to teach us how to behave