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A breakdown of the figure for generating electricity using many sources in two distant countries


IvanMS027 43 / 56 9  
Nov 20, 2016   #1
The pie charts below show electricity generation by source in New Zealand and Germany in 1980 and 2010.

A breakdown of the figure for generating electricity with many sources in New Zealand and Germany in 1980 and 2010 is shown in the pie charts. Overall, it can be seen that the units of both countries increased significantly, even though there was a difference in electricity they used.

In 1980, coal was used to generate the electricity, having 56 of the total 127 units, increasing to 150 of the total 200 units in 2010. However, there was a difference in Germany which they mostly depended on nuclear power plant with 155 out of 214 units in 2010.

Hydropower also became the second largest electricity source in 2010 although, in France, hydro-power lost the usage falling from 7 to 2 units. Both countries, however, did not depend anymore on natural gas, indicated by 2 percent for both. The same condition happened to coal electricity source in New Zealand, but in Germany, it increased to 27 in 2010.

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MufliHamid - / 21 7  
Nov 20, 2016   #2
... even though there was a HUGE difference in TERMS OF MAJOR electricity SOURCES they used.

YOU NEED TO MENTION THE COUNTRY FIRST HERE -->
In 1980, coal was used to ...
TRY THIS -> IN 1980. THE MOST COMMON SOURCE TO GENERATE ELECTRICITY FOR NEW ZEALAND'S PEOPLE WAS COAL. HAVING......

... falling from 7 to 2 units.
IN ADDITION, WHILE GERMANY USED A SMALL NUMBER OF UNITS OF HYDROPOWER IN BOTH YEARS, NEW ZEALAND SAW THE REVERSE WITH 30 AND INCREASED 46 UNITS RESPECTIVELY IN THE NEXT 30 YEARS.

PLEASE AIM YOUR SELF TO FINISH THE ESSAY WITH 165 WORDS.
NinaJoesuf25 36 / 66 4  
Nov 21, 2016   #3
A breakdown of the information of the figure for generating (...) and Germany in between 1980 and 2010 is ...
... seen that the unitselectricty generationused of both countries increased significantly(without comma here) even though there was a difference kind of energy in electricity they used.


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