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Remember! Introduction sentence use Present Tense
A breakdown of figure for holidaymakers visit
five different countries...
Egypt and Brazil stood at the same point approximately
ten in 1995,
USA and Malaysia a slight went up between 1995 and 2000
, while Egypt existed higher number ...
while in USA appeared almost threefold bigger than of this in 1995.
USA and Malaysia a slight went up ...
Where is the VERB?
Furthermore, from 2005 to 2010, France saw a
... about 15 to just under 90. The highest point ...
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