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A breakdown of a wind turbine design as an another Source of Renewable Energy


Bunglon11 28 / 31 5  
Feb 18, 2016   #1
The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.


A breakdown of a wind turbine design and three different locations to be placed, is illustrated in the diagrams. At first glance, a wind turbine contents several parts, which has their each function. There are three different places that can be used to put the turbine.

Moving to a design, a wind turbin feature consists of blader-fibreglass/wood, steel tower, wind sensor, generator, and computer. Each part of the turbine has a function such blades, which is as a receiver of wind. Then, wind sensor is used to detect speed and direction which is followed by generator as a power producer with output 1,5 megawatts of electricity. Moreover, another component is a computer to receive information from the sensor. All parts are combined to construct a wind turbine to be used as an electrical source.

Turning to the locations, there are three different locations that can be used to place the turbin. The first, on the hill, in this place the maximum wind strenghts can be obtained. The second, it is in the sea with landscape not spoiled, and another place is near home as a domestic turbine that is able to produce 100 kilowatts electricity.




justivy03 - / 2,367 607  
Feb 19, 2016   #2
Hi Hadi, I would like to share my insights to your analysis.

- design andin three different locations to be placed, is illustrated in the diagrams.
- a wind turbine contentsconsist of several parts,
- places that can be used to putlocations where the turbines can be placed .

- Moving to athe design,
- a wind turbine feature consists
- which isacts as a receiver of wind.

- TurningMoving to the locations,
- there are three different locations that can be used to place the turbinwhere the turbines can be placed .
- The first,O n the hill,
- homethe houses as a domestic turbine that is

There you have it Hadi, I hope the remarks and corrections I made helped enhance your essay.
Do let us know should you need further assistance.
awe_28 25 / 10 6  
Feb 19, 2016   #3
Hi Bunglon, let me give you some suggestion :)
A breakdown of a wind turbine design and three different locations to be placed , is illustrated in the diagrams. At first glance, a wind turbine contents several parts, which has their each function. There are three different places (YOU HAVE SAID THIS INFORMATION AT THE PREVIOUS SENTENCE. SO, IT IS REPEATED) that can be used to put the turbine

May be you can use this sentence "In general, getting more electricity via wind will be more effective if structure and location are considered." for your third sentence in introduction.
OP Bunglon11 28 / 31 5  
Feb 26, 2016   #4
thank you for all the corrections

I will rewrite this essay, please check my next writing
I still need assistance from all members of EF and especially contributor to enhancing my writing skill.

My Best Regards
Hadi


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