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Here's brief summary about me. I have lots of habits such as reading books, hang out with friends.


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Jun 19, 2016   #1
Can someone help me correct the paragraphs below, I want to know where I made mistakes, you.

This is the first time I've posted on essay forum.I'm here for ready to improve my writing skills and figure out where is my mistake.Here's brief summary about me.

I have lots of habit such as reading book,hang out with friends.Whereas the most things which part of my life and I love to do.That is studying english.English is my cup of tea,my passionate,is something that I have to study hard to achieve my objection.

To me,It is never easy,you need to patient,discipline,and of course seriously study it.But don't too worry,take it easy cause I always thinks that I can do it and I can handle it.The way you thought is really have huge effect on your study.Belive me or not thinking positive way is really helpful for all of us.

Thanks for spending your time to read this post.I'm appreciate that someone will help me finding my mistake.@vyvyy_sfnr

justivy03 - / 2,366 607  
Jun 20, 2016   #2
Hi Vy, to tell you honestly, as I read your post, I thought it was a student talk thread, I thought it was something that you need advice of or guidance with, which actually turned out yes, you do need guidance in this particular post.

Moving forward, please find additional help below;

- I'm here, for ready to improve my writing skills
- and figure out where is my mistakes are .
- Here's brief summary about me.( brief - summary is synonymous to each other, therefore writing them side by side is redundant )

- I have lots ofOne of my habits arehabit such as
- reading booksand hang out with friends.
- Whereas the most things which part of my life and I love to do.That isHowever, studying english is one of the things I love to do and I enjoy the most .

- English is my cup of tea,myI am passionate about it ,
- isit's something that I
- havelove to study about and I work hard to achieve
- my objectionobjective .

- ToFor me,It is never easy,
- you need to be patient,discipline,
- The way you thoughtthinkis reallywill have a huge
- Belie ve me orit not thinking positive way is really helpful for all of us.

There you have it Vy, as you can see, there's a lot of corrections necessary to make your essay understandable and even meaningful to the readers. I understand that English is your cup of tea, however, as I review your essay, there's still a lot of practice needed for you to be able to express yourself in the English language, so keep writing.


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