Can someone help me correct the paragraphs below, I want to know where I made mistakes, you.
This is the first time I've posted on essay forum.I'm here for ready to improve my writing skills and figure out where is my mistake.Here's brief summary about me.
I have lots of habit such as reading book,hang out with friends.Whereas the most things which part of my life and I love to do.That is studying english.English is my cup of tea,my passionate,is something that I have to study hard to achieve my objection.
To me,It is never easy,you need to patient,discipline,and of course seriously study it.But don't too worry,take it easy cause I always thinks that I can do it and I can handle it.The way you thought is really have huge effect on your study.Belive me or not thinking positive way is really helpful for all of us.
Thanks for spending your time to read this post.I'm appreciate that someone will help me finding my mistake.@vyvyy_sfnr