The text shows a method for collecting water using an animal (ox or buffalo), a pulley and a bucket.
First, this animal is linked with the bucket by a rope. Next, the rope run through the pulley to pull the bucket up. Finally, there is a irrigation channel where water is stored.
The process begin when this animal walks downhill and the bucket rises from the wells. Water is poured slowly into irrigation channels by pulley. The animal is stronger than humans, so it can collect water from deep wells eassily.
The systems aware that how natural materials and an animal can collecting water without human.
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