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The budget and calculated spendings by a certain UK school during three decades (1981 to 2001)


SarlindaDS_27 42 / 52 5  
Nov 5, 2016   #1
The charts illustrate about the modifying of detail expenditures which relatives by a certain UK school during three decades started from 1981 to 2001. Overall, all of the features had been gradually increased step by step during three decades, where the teachers' salaries had been the highest percentages of the school expenditures in each decade.

Among to the next decades in 1981, 1991 until 2001, the expenditure of features had been changed inconsistently where the insurance budget's had been gradually increased by 1 % until reached 6 % in 2001. Contrast with other features that had been changed in every decade where others staff's salaries had been declined gradually with fair significant by 13 % in 2001 than in 1981. But the book's provided, school's necessary and teacher's salaries had been fluctuated trends with up and down expenditures during decades where the books provided had been dropped to 9 % and the school's equipment had been jumped to 23 % otherwise the teacher's salaries had been dropped to 45 % in 2001 after had been declined by 5 % since in 1991 but still had been the highest percentage of all the expenditure features over the decades.

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badafebriani17 34 / 44 1  
Nov 5, 2016   #2
Hello miss Sarlinda this is my suggestion

1. V [Increased] + Adj [gradually]
... features had been gradually increased (gradually) step by step (...) the highest percentages of the school ...

2. numbers up to ten should write as words [six, one] and numbers over ten should write as pictures [2001, 75]
... next decades in 1981, 1991 until 2001, (...) budget's had been gradually increased (gradually) by 1 % (one percent) until reached 6 % (at) (six percent) in 2001.

3. than--> explaining there is a comparison. [bigger......than....]
... had been declined gradually with fair significant by 13 % in 2001 (which is bigger) than in 1981

overall good job
OP SarlindaDS_27 42 / 52 5  
Nov 5, 2016   #3
I'm sorry, I forget to attach the picture of the charts, So these is it :)





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