There has been a debate
This is not a debated topic. it is referred to as a factual topic in the prompt. Address it as such in the restatement without an attestation. Something along the lines of:Student harrasment is now considered a collosal issue in academic institutions.
This is a clear restatement of the topic that uses O keywords from the original. such a sentence increases the L.R.score.
several problems have resulted from this tendency ...effective solutions.
Where there are direct questions, direct responses must be provided to create a proper and clear thesis outline for your reasoning paragraphs. Indicate the discussion topics in relation to the 2 questions. repeating the questions without clear responses does not meet TA scoring requirements in relation to discussion clarity.
To begin with... of negotiating and persuading
There is no sense in using a long-winded opening sentence when your score is better increased by using a topic sentence instead. Your actual response does not stout till the second sentence, which is the C + C scoring consideration sentence.
-tempered and unconscious when dealing with their issues in reality. Furthermore, along with fast-paced, while activitie...
Fast paced what? This is incomplete and lacks understandability in reference to the parents activities.
On the other hand, there would be two ways to deal with the problem
There is no other hand because this is not a causes paragraphs but a solutions paragraph. These are now 2 seperate discussion ideas that cannot use a comparison transition reference phrase.