The two maps show how the island change after the construction of some tourist facilities.
In general, the construction creates a new appearance for the island. First of all, the first map shows that the island used to have only some trees and have no sign of human living there. The island is huge with the length of approximately 250 metres.
It is clear that the island changes totally after being rebuilt. We can easily see that there are two areas of accommodations, one is located nearby the sea, the other is in the centre. Between them is a restaurant and a reception which surrounded by vehicle track. There is also a pier with yatches for tourists to transport. The beach is also used for swimming.
In short, the island has significiant changes which support the human's demand. It will be good for tourism
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