Camille A. Brown: A visual history of social dance in 25 moves

Camille said that dance is language that can emerge and express a society. It not just a dance but, it is a choreographed by anyone who want to make a sequent body movement. Lots of people should realize that dance need a crativity both individuals and creative identity because social dances named Bubble Up changes and spreads like wildfire.

We have to remember about history of dance. In American-African dances how they could be influenced by history. These are fully adapted by creative movement in the present. We need a huge emotional spirit to create a choreography as like the Cakewalk, the dance that parodied by mannerisms of Southern high society. A mad thing about this dance is performed for the masters who never suspended of being fun.

In the 1980s and 1990s this trend countinued with the emergence of hip-hop, african-american social dance that more vixible that long last past. Camille end his TED's talk with "We speak a common language. We exist and we are free".

Hello Mdaman,

Better if you can make this sentence into ACCORDING TO MS.Camille put commasaid that dance is language that canABLE TO emerge and ...

... realize that dance need a crativityCREATIVITY both..

... to create a choreography as like theINSPIRED BY Cakewalk,

GOOD LUCK!

Camille said that dance is A language that can ...
It not just a dance but, it is a choreographedCHOREOGRAPHY by anyone who want to make a sequent SEQUENCE body movement.
... that dance need a crativity CREATIVITY FOR both individuals and creative identity because social dances named Bubble Up changes ...


confusing sentence. poor coherence. can't get what you meant

We have to remember about THE history of dance.
In American-African dances how they could be influenced by history. ?

In the 1980s and 1990s this trend countinued with the emergence of hip-hop, african-american social dance that more vixible that long last past.

Read again your sentences, make sure that those make a sense and can be easily understand by readers.