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The Cause I Believe In - Uphold Peace

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Oct 29, 2011   #1
"If you wish to experience peace, provide peace for another."
Mahatma Gandhi.

Peace is not something you own; it is something you make, something you do, something you are, something you give away. It is something you must believe in.

Corruption is recognized to be one of the world's greatest challenges. It is a major hindrance to sustainable development, with a very bad impact on poor communities and is corrosive on the very erection of society. The impact on the private sector is also considerable, it boldly interferes in economic growth, distorts competition and represents serious legal and reputational risks. As well as affecting economic efficiency, corruption can also have distributional consequences like extortion, bribery, double-standards and intimidation as well as in terms of being hit by the negative and harsh consequences of corruption on country's overall development processes.

These affect are infecting our society, not only those who have been forced to do their jobs with dishonesty and disloaylity but also the youth, who one day, will become the pillars to our nation. It is a tragedic arise to the criminality that is being built in the caves of corruption. Before the greed of it overcomes the efforts of fair, truthful world we are trying to build, we must step up to protect it. Not only to protect but also to reaffirm faith in fundamental human rights, in the dignity and worth of the human person, in the equal rights of men and women and of nations large and small, to establish conditions under which justice and constitutionality can be maintained and to promote social progress and better standards of life in larger freedom. Let peace lead us from despair to hope, from fear to trust; let it lead us from hate to love, from war to peace; let peace fill our heart, our world, our universe with equality, harmony and untiy forever.

Just a glimpse of my narration, wanned to know what you guys feel about it. Any sort of criticism is welcomed(as far as it is helpful).

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