By giving my real experience first then linking with the topic , could it be possible?
I think this is possible but I prefer a short and direct introduction. The introduction provides readers with main points you intend to develop. Also, writing a simple introduction will help you save time to support your ideas in your body paragraphs.
That is the big problem in educating teenagers because violent or sexual content is not usually showed as supporting role in the main story in some multimedia products. Most of them often masquerade as "art scene" with "liberating human instinct" meanings. Therefore, the lack of knowledge about law, worst moral or the curiosity could lead teenagers' view to the wrong way under the bad influence of violent or porno products.
I find this paragraph irrelevant to the topic.
put the programs about sex education and law in schools
include sex education in the curriculum
could be raised in knowledge
You can omit this part.
Beside it
Besides
every sensitive product
What do you mean by "sensitive product"?
have just a little effect
have little or no effect
on our curious children
One solution
Another solution
porno products
pornography
in decrease
in decreasing