Hi Dyah, I have several comments and suggestion for you :
GRAMMATICAL ISSUES :
Media are source of actual information
Media = don't you think that you should put an article "the" ? check your vocabulary. I am afraid it is inappropriate.
Source = a source / sources
favourite celebrities
favorite celebrities
fans are becoming popular recorded
fans are becoming more popular recorded
a number of TV viewers in New York follows
it should be plural = a number ... follow / the number ... follows
some of people
some people
For straightforward example
For straightforward examples or For a straightforward examples
the news are informative
the news is informative
gain new real story
gain a new real story / gain new real stories
There are many grammatical errors :(. To tell you the truth, I intend to comments your flows and Idea but I think it would be better if you recheck your grammar first.
I hope my comments can help you to improve your writing.
KEEP STUDY, KEEP SPIRIT.