In today's cutting edge era
Cutting edge refers to the most advanced technology, which exists in every era... so I think this needs to be reworked...
That first para is too short and needs a thesis statement added to the end of it.
You misuse some words here:
There are a number of
ways reasons behind this. First, such people's feelings are orthodox. Second, they are lazy and inefficient, always
boast resisting
against new innovations and changes. ..
It is true that, "If a
person does not change himself according to changes in his environment, then environmental chang es will change him." In an organization, old employees
do not like their old systems being updated with advanced computer system because they cannot see that their methods w ill be replaced by newer, more efficient ones.
Keep practicing English! You have great ideas, but you have mistakes, too. Do you have questions about any of these changes? Please practice typing the correct way, as we showed you.
You can make another post in this thread with improvements and corrections based on the feedback we gave you.
:-)