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The changes in an American town between 1994 and 2010 - essay for WRITING TASK 1


andika08 81 / 80 16  
Nov 21, 2016   #1
The both maps display about alteration of the development in cities in America over sixteen year period. Overall, there are significant change with the several facilities that had been built in the town.

A more detailed look at the graph, after the construction, the commercial buildings was by far dominated in beside the canal. Afterwards, the local supermarket was changed by the commercial buildings. Beside, the houses was knocked down too in this area. The Supermarket was built across from the Petrol Station. Moving to the north-east side, the facilities such as the airport was erected and changed the two factories also the location near to the high way. Close to the supermarket area, the commercial buildings was designed with the number of three construction.

Turning to the south-east side, the number of residential houses still same as before as many ten houses. In addition, close to the canal the sport stadium was built in the area.






ryan31 65 / 96 15  
Nov 21, 2016   #2
aloha dika
I have some suggestions for you
hope it helps

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