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IELTS TASK 1 : The changes in the layout of the Woodwards University


Nofrinorman 27 / 17 8  
Nov 5, 2015   #1
The map displays the changes in the layout of the Woodwards University between 1985 and now. It can be seen that the transformation witnessed arrangement in all space, execpt in Library there was not replacement, but only an addition by IT Center area and built lengthier.

First, to the north side of room occurrenced affiliation in the science block to science laboratories. Then, Car Park modified to Shuttle Bus Terminal which was located in the south west side of university and connecting to Library and IT Center. In front of Science Laboratories placed a Lecture Theatre which was earlier the small Car Park.

The Admin Building has also moved to upwards with smaller scale, nearby the Lecture Theatre. On the other side, all of the road in 1985 has canceled became footpaths which acsessed to the nortwest side and the southwest side for now. The solely one road constructed in the south of university which used to Bus strip.




vangiespen - / 4,137 1449  
Nov 5, 2015   #2
Norman, while your grasp of the English language really needs to be improved, I could definitely see that you understood the chart as it was given to you and you understood what was happening within it perfectly. Now, while the way that you deliver the information is not as important as the fact that you delivered the correct information to your reader, it is important that you still try to make your essay easily understood using as much proper grammar as you can.
akbarmappiare 31 / 469 275  
Nov 6, 2015   #3
Hy Novri, I will give suggestion. I hope that this can help you to improve your grammar.
You must check again your word spelling before you upload and must write word "to" between two verb words.
Keep spirit...

... arrangement in all space, execpt except in Library there was not replacement, but only an addition by IT Center Centre area and built lengthier.

First Firstly, to the north side of room, occurrenced affiliationin the science block to science laboratoriesprogramme buildings as: physics, chemistry, and biology building, which are unified into the same department .

... connecting to Library and IT Center Centre.

... all of the road in 1985 has canceledcancelled to became footpaths which acsessed accessed to the north west side and the southwest side for now.


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