The issue of characteristics more than experience can motivate on our development and Individuality in life
This is an incomplete sentence. You could change it a bit, for example: Some people believe that people's development and individuality are more influenced by characteristics.
, similarly, we learn different activities that act in future life are likely to happen in the future
You could start a new sentence from "Similarly".
makes us understanding
integrate with
integrate into
Is this a discussion essay? If so, you should discuss each view in each body paragraph. However, I feel that your first body paragraph is a bit off-topic as it focuses on how upbringing and education rather than characteristics influence individuals.
Self-individuality
Individuality
Self-individuality is a part of natural life even can recognize the self-esteem and self-honour.
This is not clear. I don't quite get your point here.
a good character assists to exchange everything with each other, for this reason, it is very important in life.
You could start a sentence from "A".
In conclusion, characteristics motivate us to reach our goals and provoke to develop our self-identity. Experience to novelty keeps a good learning of knowledge
You need to clarify these points on your body paragraphs.
I hope this helps!