The chart shows the employees of men and women in the nine type of jobs in the UK at 2005

The bar chart below shows the employment of all male and female workers by occupation in the UK, in the year 2005.

The bar chart illustrates about career of the employees by men and women with the nine type of job in the UK at 2005 and counted by percentage. The women had a first rank in the Administrative job. While the men prefer in the skilled trades.

The women was a lead the job at 22% in Administrative and secretarial, although the men more interested in the skilles trades. Subsequently, the women chose the associate professional and technical as the second favorit job at 15%. Followed by the men in manager and senior official at 18%.

The women had small trend to work in the skilled trades and process, plant and machine operatives at 3%. However, the men do not interested in the perrsonal service with similar level. In which the man uncomfortable work in the sales and officer with the figure at 5%.

The bar chart illustrates about career of the employees by OF men and women with IN the nine type of jobS in the UK at 2005 and THIS IS counted by percentage. IT IS NOTICEABLE THAT The women had a first rank in the Administrative job. While the men prefer JOB in the skilled trades.

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Hi Dina, here's additional insights to your analysis.

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- with the nine types of
- jobs in the UK at 2005
- While the men prefer in the skilled trades.

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- although the men are more
- interested in the skilles trades.
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- The women had a small
- men does not have interested
- in the perr sonal service with similar level( this phrase is not necessary ) .
- In which the man where uncomfortable
- working in the sales
- and officer with the figure at 5%.

There you have it Dina, I say, push for more practice writing, read a lot of English literatures as this will boost your vocabulary as well as your writing skills.

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