Overall, the chart shows international tourism is the highest incomes. On the other hand, meat products are the most minimize incomes. Meat products are decrease gradually from 2005 to 2025. In 2005, the income of meat products is 4 billion dollars, but it decrease during 20 years with revenue 3 billion dollars in 2025. The total income from meat products during 20 years in the amount of 10 billion dollars and 2005 become the best annual income for meat products. Dairy products increase dramatically from 2005 to 2015 with difference almost 3 billion dollars and a little of decrease after 10 years. The total income from dairy products is 20,5 billion dollars. On the contrary from meat products, international tourism are increased gradually during 2005 to 2025 with the total income 21 billion dollars. Start from 2005 which has income 6 billion dollars to 2025 with income almost 8 billion dollars. Compare with the others, International tourism become the greatest income in 2005 and 2025. But dairy products become greatest income in 2015.
Hallo Dioba, I will try to give you some suggests.
..., international tourism are increased gradually during 2005 (... international tourismwere increase )
In 2005, the income of meat products iswas 4 billion dollars
but it will decrease during 20 years ...
Hello Dioba,
Overall , [i think would be better started in introduction and then conclusion] the chart shows international tourism ...
... meat products are the most minimize minority incomes.
the income of meat products isare amount 4 billion dollars, (...) 20 years withby total revenue 3 billion ...
The total income from meat products ....
The total income from dairy products ...
pay attention repetition word.
hope these help
Hi Dioba ..
Let me give you some advice...
Overall, the chart shows .......(first, you should pharaprase the tittle of your table before the table overview) international tourism is ...
..., meat products are the most minimizelowest incomes. Meat products aredecreasedecreased gradually from 2005 to 2025. In 2005, the income of meat products iswas 4 billion dollars, but it decreaseyou could change into declined during 20 years with ...
Dairy products increaseincreasedyou could change with other vocab such as arose from dramatically from ...
The total income from dairy products iswere 20,5 billion dollars.
... international tourism are increased gradually duringfrom 2005 to 2025 (you could change with from..to, between..and, since..until) with the total income 21 billion dollars.
... International tourism becomebecomes the greatest income in...
You should avoid repetation and try to use other vocabularies..
Good job.
hello Dioba, i have some suggestion for you.
Overall,(first you should introductions) the chart shows ==> (you can paraphrase the word with describes, illustrates, intences, displays) international tourism is ...
On the other hand(you can change the word with on the other side, in spite of) , meat products are the most minimizethe lowest incomes.
Dairy products increased dramatically from 2005 ...
.., International tourism becomes the greatest income ...
hello dioba
it is great writing, but I have several advices
hope it can improve your writing skills
1. please ensure you attach image before, it makes viewer more convenient to gives some feedbacks
.., meat products are the most minimizelowestincomes. <<< I think comparison highest more suitable to use lowest
In 2005, the income of meat products is 4 billion dollars, but it ...
I think this sentence more powerful (in 2005, the income of meat products is stood at 4 billion dollars, but it decreased gradually to 3 billion dollars in 2025.)
The total income from meat products during 20 years in the amount ...
the total profit from meat products for 20 years is 10 billion dollars, while 2005 is the best income whole of this period.
Dairy products increase dramatically from 2005 to 2015 with difference ...
Turning to in 2005 to 2015, dairy products increased dramatically approximately 3 billion dollars, but it experienced a slight decrease for 10 years.
.., international tourism are increased gradually duringfrom 2005 to 2025 with ... <<<< collocation "from" is "to"
Start from 2005,which hasthe income is 6 billion dollars to ...
thanks
keep writing
good job
