IELTS (TASK 1) CHARTS of diversity and change

The charts below show the diversity and change . The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.

Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.

Adult Education is a growing field. For this reason, a survey was conducted to determine why adults decide to study. Interest in subject was the reason for 4 out of each 10 persons were asked. While 38 % think it is necessary to gain qualifications, only 22 % think it is helpful for current job and 20 % believe it is important to improve prospects of promotion. In addition 12 % of people think it is important to change jobs.

On other hand, 29 % do not share the same thinking but it is good as they enjoy studying and some said it is good to meet people.

Funding is the most important dimension in the process. People think that they should pay only 40 % of the cost while the balance should be paid by employers, 35 % and tax payers, 20 %.

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These are the results of a survey that was conducted to understand the reasons why adults decide to study. ... this is for a uni lecture; So you need to present it from that perspective.


For out of ten people have decided to study due to their interest in subject .... In lectures, generally it is good to employ direct speech. That's more clear and interesting.

Thank you so much for your valuable comments :)

:).... Well, I have made a small typo ;


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You have described the trends well up to this point;


... this is not written properly and hence the reader gets confused. My suggestion;
However,another 29% do not share the same thinking as the others do. They decide to study merely for enjoyment or for networking opportunities.