CHEATING IS GOOD AND BAD! (in easy words)

People working hard is the easiest way to success but what I only say is cheating is the key to success....It is success in two ways ... :

IF YOU SEE POSITIVELY:-
Cheating helps people strengthen their minds with just a word , nothing else and everybody in this country has cheated at least once in his or her life even I did because no one in this world is so powerful to say that i have not cheated even once ...Because when someone trie to tell and prove at that time , he remembers all those times he did . Life is not as easier as it seems to be ., because in old times if a person told a lie he probably started feeling to be hung and die but now if the kids cheat , they don't even feel guilty of what they just did.I might have many wrong concepts in my words but still i have the power to say cheating is just a way to help one in a case of such helplessness... But kids even we should remember that cheating is a frod to the teacher .. he teaches us makes our tests, he spends almost half of his time on us but what we give is best result in worst way.

IF YOU SEE NEGATIVELY:-
It's obviously th devil telling us to cheat because it's made of fire and in end it will go into that fire of the hell but we can save ourselves by choosing the right path , the right choice , to listen to our mind because heart is only made to keep us alive but the brain is seperately present in us so that we take all our decisions by being in senses , by taking the right choice and kids believe that cheating is the only way to make a teacher happy and to make his mood the best , but kids also should think that if the teacher will get to know that we cheated then he will give us big punishment and his mood will become the worst so we should never rely on cheating , we should find or make our own and easy way to success that is hardworking...

Many of my words contain burning reality and this happens in many schools so the purpose of chosing this topic is to inform the teachers to look carefully taking tests and to give a leesion to all the kids who will or are reading this essay because kids CAN cheat in tests BUT they CAN'T cheat in the FINALS so it's better to hate cheating from start if kids want success..

First This Some Wrong Words : ( ford - try - separately ) Not ( frod - trie - seperately )


Check That =====> ( because the best way for for being success is working hard )


Check That =====> ( a lot of my words )


Check That ====> ( because that happens in many schools )


Check That ====> ( to inform the teachers who will read this essay to look carefully and give a useful lessons to the kids about the badness of the cheating because The kids are already cheat In some tests But Fortunately they CAN'T cheat in the FINALS so it would be better If they refused cheating from the beginning if They Want Success In Their Own Life )

use capital "I"

You should have had at least two full stops here. :( The sentence is too long and it disturbs clarity of your ideas.


This is a very cofusing sentence. I do not get what uou try to tell. You need to rephrase this line once again.


.... cheating helps a person when he or she is in a very desperate situation.

.... is this just one sentence? I cannot find any full stop anywhere :( You need to have several sentences to express all these ideas.
First, you need to be clear about what you are going to write. Then you need to put them in sentences very clearly that your reader would not get confused. Clarity is very important in writing. It's much more important than using advance vocabulary and constructing sentences with complex ideas.

You have to pay lots of attention to this aspect!