... children are facing the pressure in many ...
1. "the" is refer to something that you already mentioned before. You don't mention any pressure before so avoid to use that.
Reducing the pressures isARE needed to ...
2. PRESSURES (PLURAL) + ARE (PLURAL)
... have to study (COMMA) so that they ...
3. add comma before linking words
Taking a THE parenting education and ...
4. use "the" because you already mention parenting education before