preparing children to the adulthood
A child can not differential good and bad. They can learn from their parents or their surrounding environmental. According Seifert and Hoffnung. They are child psychologist interpret that development can growth form a person and effect for long-term, mindset, social relations, and skill motoric. They involve development for child that change the child can see from their mindset, social interaction, and emotionals.
The child must explore the nature. Because from the nature they can learn all about they seen. And the mother must monitoring her child for give a information and suggestion for their child. Mother is the first teacher for children. So, existence the mother is important for growth the children.
School is very needed for people, especially for the children. Because, people can get knowledge and insight theoretically.
I think i agree that the parents is important for become a their teacher at home and teach everytime and everywhere. And the teacher at the school also have important role for get a knowledge. Both between parents and teacher have important role for become a good members of society for the children.
For example, the children have conditions of disability. Resulting in the child have no many friends. So, the parents can give the child motivation and become a friends forever who understand her/his condition. And, the teacher at the school become her/his place for get a hardskill or softskill for improve their value.
If both can not combine, then they lost balance for get a good members of society. Both can not be divided because is important for the children.
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