"In some cultures, children are expected to follow very strict rules of behaviour. In other cultures, children are allowed to do almost anything they want.What are the merits of each opinion?What is your position on the matter?Include relevant examples in your response ".
there are three questions in your prompt and those questions have to restatement in the introduction.
A healthful comportament in childhood depends in many cases on religious and cultural matters. Consequently, the sense of politeness and mischivious manners differ between nations. While in South Eastern countries stricter approaches to educate children are preferred, in Western countries is more common to utilitsate kindful methods. In this essay I will set forth the benefits that these two educational approaches ential in a child's upbringing life.
A healthful comportament in childhood depends in many cases on religious and cultural matters. >>
HookWhile in South Eastern countries stricter approaches to educate children are preferred, in Western countries is more common to utilitsate kindful methods. >>
BackgroundIn this essay I will set forth the benefits that these two educational approaches ential in a child's upbringing life. >>
thesis statemen personally i like your introduction, but remember you should paraphrase the prompt well.