What exactly do you mean with "insinuate?"
historical events
that happened
This site might help you out with some grammar bits like the use of that v. which:
grammarbook.com/grammar/whoVwhVt.asp
as
symbols of
memorize the significant episodes
I think "memorize" is not being used correctly here...
merriam-webster.com/dictionary/memorize
Looking at the shabby Rome city
devastated
temples and demolished palace
We can also acknowledge thatThese buildings were ruined after the kingdom was vanquished by the
enemy; thus, historic buildings are one fundamental method by which we can learn about significant events in history.
an old Arabic mosque is more likely
to have a
buildings with the modern
oneisn't it similar with alternating our culture with the prevalent one?
I think this should be re-worded. Something like, "are we not abandoning our historic culture to rest solely on the modern one?" or getting rid of the question all together and making it a statement.
obligation to pass
on all historical buildings
which is vague and
inauthentictangible to the next generation.
Try swapping "tangible" for a word like "accessible"
capable of acquainting
themselves with an
Neverthelless
, maintaining historic buildings
requires a tremendous amount of money and old buildings are easily destroyed by earthquake
s.Still, the cultural value of a historic
al building is worth preserving
even on economic grounds. To learn more about history, to
more distinguish
from other culture
s, and for the next generations' sake,
stop destroying the historic buildings!
Do you really want to get this emotional? How formal is this essay?
Well, I hope my
suggestions helped =)