in front of them should they opt for a job or go to college of university to gain more knowledge and attain a professional degree
as to whether they should opt for a job or pursue higher education in university
It is believed
If this is your opinion, state it more clearly. For example: I believe/I agree ...
help you students have a better and sable more stable career
Don't use "you" in your academic writing.
the curriculum these days
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they gain both theoretical and practical knowledge of their field
that offers both theoretical and practical knowledge to learners.
someone
students
is been trained
are trained
Most of these universities
What are "these universities"?
have tie ups
have some links
so that they gain good practical experience also.
to improve their practical experience.
co-operates
corporations
with most of them
most of which
good full-time professional degree's
a full-time professional degree
However, on the other hand
joining a job
having a job
in your field
What do you mean by "in your field" in this case?
too much of money
as compared to