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IELTS Task 2: How color influence people's health and capacity for work


tiaDS 73 / 235 52  
Jan 23, 2014   #1
Psychologists have known for many years that color can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to color schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does color influence people's health and capacity for work?

Color is the part of our soul that every person has different favorite color. There are differences colors as a reflection of genre. Boys tend to choose black and red colors when they bought a t-shirt as represented that they are more bravely than women. On the other case, every color gives a different sense, so consideration mix and match color to decorate a room is really significant. In the particularly place color plays the important role to encourage people feeling such as hospitals and offices. This essay will examine about essential role of color in people life.

As a matter of fact, designers who compose colors and patterns will choose different color based on room function. It is because every color can depict different atmosphere. Color can boost good feeling for workers who need a color to give a treatment in their eyes. While, yellow and red are chosen to paint creative division's room to flush creativity, collaboration soft color are painted in meeting room for keeping calm people who use this place, for instance. John Adam, a senior lecture of Harvard University, conducts the result that color can burn spirit of people who lose their main focus on the task.

While work is about good output contribution, hospitals use the color for healthy reason. Most of people have mindset that hospital is most discouraging place where is not recommended to visit there. For instance, children are terrified coming in dental, so dental's room adopts colorful pattern and entertaining picture to persuade children more comfortable. White is the main color to reveal that hospital is hygienic, while green color is worn by surgeon. In fact, bold color will make eyes tired, so relaxing shades are needed green color which is soft and fresh color.

Having said this, people will feel quite calm and comfortable when they saw the green leafs in outside window. Moreover, Scientist at Stanford University in California found that color is recognized by infant through color-word and record the stuff "crayon is red" which depicts color appearances. They only remember that crayon has red color, so subject is important for children to recall kind of colors.

To sum up, I cannot deliberate that color is not influence mood people in the work. Many facts show, there is a direct link between color and mood. Although, red is the icon of brave feeling, while some people feel afraid when they saw blood. Moreover, red will make people on fire in work, but it gives eyes attack when people spend a lot of time to see this color.

leoking 7 / 24 1  
Jan 24, 2014   #2
it seems not like a ielts topic to me
dumi 1 / 6,930 1592  
Jan 24, 2014   #3
Color is the part of our soul that every person has a different favorite color.

.... Well, I get your idea , however, it does not flow smoothly;
Colors play an important role in our lives and every person has his or her own preferences when it comes to colors.

There are differences colors as a reflection of genre.

I dont find much contribution to your essay from the above line. Rather, its sounds a bit too complicated and it disturbs your flow too :(

Boys tend to choose black and red colors when they boughtbuy a t-shirt as represented that they are more bravely than women.

This is kind of stereotype statement. There are many women who love black and red. Also you need to pay attention to grammar.
OP tiaDS 73 / 235 52  
Jan 24, 2014   #4
Dear Dumi,

thanks for your advise, all sentences, whis are mentioned by you, come from intro. Could you give me the best way to compose introduction? It is because i'm still confuse when i will begin to write a essay, specially in writing task 2.
Pahan 1 / 1,908 553  
Jan 24, 2014   #5
Let's do one for this following this approach;
Colors have a great impact on our lives (hook)
According to many psychologists, the colors affect our emotions and the way we feel . (definition of the question) Therefore it is a widely accepted fact that color schemes should be selected to suit the mood of the place when it is decorated. (importance of the question).... Background

However, I do not agree with this view and I believe the colors do not necessarily influence the way people feel. .... your opinion


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