writing task 1:Integration problem in living abroad
A combination of difficulties in living in a foreign country has been experiencing by three different aged groups of people that is presenting the bar chart.
As it can be seen, the capacity of making friends and of finding suitable living places decrease gradually as people age increase whilst the level of native language skill continue to rise among them .
A closer look at the chart reveals that the older people ( over 55 aged ) has a positive influence in the level of foreign language compare to two other groups, which reach the highest of almost 55% whereas well above a fifth of young and of middle aged speak in local tongue.
In case of finding living places, all groups show their efficiency particularly nearly two-fifth of people (35-54 aged ) are more capable to face trouble than others, although the figures for younger and older people are almost the same , which is nearly 35%.
However, 46% of people, who are young ( 18-22 aged ), are more able to make peer while two other groups are in a dilemma of maintain friendship, the percentage start to fall from 46% to well above 20% as age increase from 18 to over 55.
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