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e-Commerce of Retail Sectors in Canada - IELTS Task 1


dinafayna04 5 / 7 1  
Aug 19, 2016   #1
Question :
The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.


The pie charts illustrate the comparison of four different e-commerce retail sectors in Canada, during a 5 year period time from 2005 to 2010. Overall, it is noticeable while meal and drink and video games saw upward trend, others experienced a downward trend.

To begin with, in 2005 the highest proportion was electronics and tools, while diet and drink saw the lowest percentage. However, in 2010 food and beverage had decreased 5% in different year , it was 35% (2005) to 30% (2010). While, households was turned out dramatically from 25% in 2005 and became 15% during a 5 year.

In the other side, food and beverage had increased significantly from 22% (2005) to 32% in 2010. It was followed by video games, in 2005 it was 18% and rised to 23% in 2010. That video game sectors saw a less dramatically change, it just decreased one out of twenty.


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Permata992 7 / 12  
Aug 19, 2016   #2
Hallo dina, i am really happy left a comment in here, i hope it will useful for you..

However, in 2010 food and beverage had decreased steadily 5% in different (...) to 30% (2010) respectively .

Thank you and good luck for your IELTS examination...


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