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You should have included a clear reference to the fact that the info is based on collated opinion survey information that received 14 responses. When information is highlighted in the image, it should be part of the summary presentation.
highest over the period shown
Incorrect. There is no period being referred to, only percentage measurements.
Therefore, students should
Do not include a personal opinion or observation in a Task 1 report. It is not a requirement and will not help your score as it will be ignored by the examiner due to irrelevance to the discussion.
The presentation format itself is incorrect. Use the following format next time:
Par. 1- Summary + trending statement
Par. 2 - General report with comparisons
Par. 3- Analysis of chosen comparison points + closing statement (not an opinion)
When faced with 2 images, add another analysis paragraph for both images. That is optional though.