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Communicating information has been a primary and constant necessity for people


fordragon 5 / 16  
Sep 7, 2010   #1
Thanks for your suggestions and editing!
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Compare advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information.State which you consider to be the most effective.
- comics
- books
- radio
- television
- film
- theatre


Communicating information has been a primary and constant necessity of we human being throughout our thousands-year-long history of civilization, by which we build up our predominant status on this planet, and apparently, the more effective the new method of communication is, the more profound influence it will bring.

To start with, books can be regarded as the torchlight lit up the darkness we explored and enlightened millions people during the era of intellectual monopoly. Indeed, books are the essence of the knowledge about science and culture which cover a great range of subjects. However, the fast tempo of lifestyle in modern society triggered by the hi-tech based on the knowledge from books, cannot comfort books themselves since their low efficiency.

In another word, people need something more effective to communicate, of course, comics meet this need soon. At first, comics always appeared to be single pictures, which simply but directly expressed ideas in an irony way. In only seconds, forks could get the main idea from comics (then burst into laugh) while they could hardly receive such punch lines from books. By contrast, in terms of content, it seems to be a weakness of comics.

As we stepped into electricity age, TV sets has come to every family, playing a pivotal role in people's daily life. This multimedia method of communication conveys video and audio signals simultaneously transformed our life significantly. Moreover, it is undoubtedly a great idea to set lectures through TV networks, for instance, Discovery, a multitude of individuals benefit from the programmes. But the costs of TV also outweigh its traditional counterparts as the advantages do.

Overall, the paces of our advance on communication will continue moving forward. Far from alone, our technology also will do so. Every methodology of communication has its cons and pros, and what to choose depends on one's preference. Thus, efficiently, TV shall be the best.

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EF_Kevin 8 / 13,335 129  
Sep 9, 2010   #2
Communicating information has been a primary and constant necessity of human beings throughout the long history of our civilization, by which we build...--I made some small changes here.

To start with, books can be regarded as the torchlight lighting up the darkness we explored and enlightening millions people during the eras of intellectual monopoly revolution.

Indeed, books are the essence of knowledge about science and culture which cover a great range of subjects. ---- good!

In other words, people need something more effective to communicate, and of course, comics meet this need. At first, comics always appeared to be single pictures, which simply but directly expressed ideas in an interesting way.

In only seconds, folks could get the main idea from comics (then burst into laughter) while they could hardly receive such punch lines from books.

By contrast, content seems to be a weakness of comics.

Overall, the process of our advancement in communication will continue moving forward.

Far from alone, our technology also will do so. Our other technologies will likewise continue to advance.

Every method of communication has its cons and pros, and what to choose depends on one's preference.

Practice all of these correctly written sentences ten times each! You should practice typing the correct way, because only through repetition in typing can you reprogram your brain to have perfect grammar.

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OP fordragon 5 / 16  
Sep 9, 2010   #3
Practice all of these correctly written sentences ten times each! You should practice typing the correct way, because only through repetition in typing can you reprogram your brain to have perfect grammar.

Thank you buddy. I know I may make some grammatical mistakes in a time limited exam. I will correct them with your advices!
Thanks again!
upul 4 / 7  
Sep 23, 2010   #4
However, the fast tempo of lifestyle in modern society triggered by the hi-tech based on the knowledge from books, cannot comfort books themselves sincedue to their low efficiency.
OP fordragon 5 / 16  
Sep 28, 2010   #5
Thanks. I've found that DUE TO is a nice phrase`


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