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IELTS ESSAY; companies and other organisations are requiring their employees to wear a uniform


devabe2005 46 / 97  
Jul 18, 2014   #1
QUESTION:
Nowadays companies and other organisations are requiring their employees to wear a uniform. Think about jobs where uniform is important. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform?

ANSWER
In the today's world, uniform is essential for protection of the employees. It is required for the protection of employees in industries, factories, hospital, hotel, restaurant, nuclear and atomic power plant, saloon etc. In this essay, I am going to give brief description of advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform.

Uniform protect from accident in construction site, nuclear or thermal power plants and chemical laboratories. It shows easy way to social relationship with others. A uniform can provide professional appearance to enhance the company in the eye of the customer. Uniform enables to feel part of a team which leads to greater success of the company. It facilitate additional advertising of the company when the employee where dress with name of the company as well as brand of the business and advertising slogan helps customers to identify their business.

On the other hand, one body type embarrasses other body type's result in low esteem and discomfort to the employees. It requires standard procedure for tailoring and getting them made to be accepted standard can be quite expensive. People will lose individual style sense as they follow dress code almost all of their lives. It makes them dull and bore because of monotonous clothes.

To sum up, though uniform has some disadvantages but it should be required for some sectors like hospital, industries, construction, research centers should have uniform to safeguard their employees. Employer should consider opinion and acceptance about the uniform of the employees which improves productivity of their business and vice versa.

SHanafi 120 / 415 93  
Jul 20, 2014   #2
Hi, devaraj

in industries, factories, hospital, hotel, restaurant, nuclear and atomic power plant, saloon etc

This is called shopping listing unfortunately, it indicates laziness. As far as I read the authentic text, they usually noted maximum three words in parallelism pattern .

for example : industries, factories and restaurants

Your second body para looks lengthy, or perhaps you forget to put a space there ?. Kindly considered about essay's layout because it is important to raise the reader's attention.


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