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Compare and contrast - knowledge gained from personal experience vs. classroom


TITLE:It has been said, "Not all learning takes place in the classroom." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from personal experience with knowledge gained from classroom. Instruction. In your opinion, which source is more important?Why?

Please help me with my English writing. I think I have Elementary words. Your comments and suggestions will be much appreciated. Thank you very much!

In life, Education is considered by our parents to be the greatest they can bequeath to us. But to those who cannot send by the parents to school, the learn-through-playing way will be their way of basic education. Proper education is badly needed by children since they will be able to take it in way to become successful in the years ahead. But I believe that learning outside the classrooms give everyone more knowledge than being inside of it.

"Experience is the best teacher", this is what majority believes in. Trials in our lives imparted skills for us to be strong enough to face our coming futures. It is definitely the reason why our Creator has filled tests in the our experience being alive not to serve as a barriers to become successful, but to recognize and appreciate Him more often than not. On the other hand, gaining from classrooms is surely the other-way-around form of learning. Children tend to receive different kind of approach, by which, it is the teacher examines each student to know how much capable are they to proceed to the next level of learning. Students are expected to show how aware they are,from the factual information the teacher fed them.

The learning you had from your past outside the classroom is considered primarily for you to achieve your goal in the future, though graduating from school is the primary basis of having a good job, It is still your experience will help you in proper dealing with everything in the outside world.

As one who learned to differentiate the the knowledge gained in and out of classrooms, I considered outside the classroom learning benefits for me more than inside. It is still the learning that you have with your family and friends that count more than anything else.

It is definitely the reason why our c reator has filled tests in the our experience

I think the word "creator" here should be in capital letter like what Ms. Khinie wrote because it pertains to "God". please correct me if I'm wrong.
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